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Monday 12 March 2012

The weather changed for the worst by Thyto P5

          In Washington D.C 1982 Billy an emotional but curios teenager was arrested for theft .in prison as every other prisoner narrated how they got into jail he narrated his, he said in his high school every night by 8:00 pm because his hostel was at the last floor some of his roommates always dressed in black and sneaked out the window. One night he dressed in black and followed them not knowing they were going to steal doing this he was caught and imprisoned.  At the night a wish granter came to Billy and asked him what his wish was because he was angry he said he wished the weather changed for the worst till today sometimes the weather does change for the worst.

1 comment:

Mrs. Bankole said...

Dear Thyto, This is quite okay. You may however need to work on organizing your story to make it more appealing.
I do hope Billy learnt his lesson that copying others is not necessarily good. Keep writing.