Tuesday 20 March 2012
Beauty's Hobby by Sunmisola P4
There lived a girl named Beauty; she had many friends at school and at church.
One day, Beauty’s class teacher told the pupils that they would have to say their hobby and the person who does well would get the golden cup. Beauty decided to practice, she studied carefully, and some of her classmates said she would not get the cup. Her classmates did not remember about it. On Sunday, Beauty said it fifty times. On Monday, she said her name and started, my best colour is white and I hate pushing and spiders. Thank you. They gave her the cup and people were so jealous.
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Hi Sunmisola, this is nice entry into 100wc for this week. You creatively used the prompts in a way different from other's spider stories.
Please be mindful of use of quotation marks to indicate when someone was speaking e.g. " ?...her name and started, "my best colour is white and I hate pushing ..."
This is also a lovely follow-up on the last week's story. Kudos!
Did you make that up Sunmisola P4? Because if you did its a brilliant story. I wish I could write that because it an intresting story. My name is Charlie and I am from High View PLC in Wombwell(England)
Did you make that up Sunmisola P4? Because if you did its a brilliant story. I wish I could write that because it an intresting story. My name is Charlie and I am from High View PLC in Wombwell(England)
Did you make that up Sunmisola P4? Because if you did its a brilliant story. I wish I could write that because it an intresting story. My name is Charlie and I am from High View PLC in Wombwell(England)
Hi! I am Danielle from High View PLC in the UK. I have just read your story and I think it's good! We are doing quadblogging and found your blog! From Danielle :D :)
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