Tuesday 3 July 2012
Rachael and her friend by Promise P3B
One day, Rachael was going to school. Obinna her friend was skipping and asks Rachael to join him. Instead, Rachael went straight to school. Later in the day, Obinna ask Rachael, “why do you think school is important?” Rachael said “because teachers teach me to be more educated”.
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Gwaith - Great!
We enjoyed reading your story. We would like to share with you 2 stars (good things about it) and a wish (something you might like to do next time you write a story).
* We were impressed that you used a question mark correctly.
* We were impressed that you used speech marks when someone was speaking.
Wish - Next time why don't you try and start a new line each time someone new speaks?
Thank you for sharing you story with us!
Class 4/5
Eastern Primary School
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