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Monday, 14 May 2012

100wc Wk 30 Promise J P3B

One day, there lived a boy named Peter, his mother told him to buy biscuit, egg, rice, chicken all in the market. So, he went to the market to buy what his mother told him to buy. After buying everything, he said to himself, ‘now what do I need to buy again’.

1 comment:

Liz Goddard TEAM100WC said...

I thought your story started well and had a proper beginning, middle and end.
You might find that reading it aloud helps you spot where you need to put punctuation like question marks at the end of questions. This always helps me check if what I have written sounds right.
Well done. Keep up the good work.