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Saturday, 26 January 2013

Sunmisola P5

ELINER THE FARMER IN a beautiful frost there lived a girl lived called Eliner she was a popular girl. Her best color was green, he father was a farmer while her mother was a public cook . there they had caravan in their city .ten years later her parent died in car accident. the people Eline knew rejected her. One day there was famine in the city Eliner was the only person that could farm. they pleaded with her and she helped them. soon there was heavy rain and people were running home .two weeks fruits grew, she became president.

1 comment:

Nicola Richardson said...

Thanks for sharing your writying Sunmisola. You included lots of detail about Elinor to help your reader to get to know the character. Remember to use punctuation to mark your sentences as that will help your reader.