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Monday, 25 June 2012

The Snack Party by Adedayo P3B

There lived a boy called Ed, Ed was six years old, he was quiet and gentle, and in his class he was the teacher’s favourite. Ed had a neighbour that makes a lot of noise. One day, Ed went to his cousin’s house, inside the house the noise was terrifying but, he was surprised when he opened the door and they told him it was his cousin’s birthday. He joined them in singing ‘Happy Birthday’ and doing all other activities, they had snack birthday party. Ed went outside the house while the party was still going on because the noise inside was terrifying to his ears.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Hi Adedayo
Really enjoyed reading your entry for this week’s 100WC. Your use of speech adds depth and interest to your writing and I think the way you have incorporated the prompt is particularly good. Your writing builds the tension and makes the reader curious to read more - well done.
Mrs Robinson (100WC Team)