Friday, 10 January 2014
But as I put the batteries in it by Promise J P5
Tommy woke up early on a Friday morning, because he was so excited to go to the new toy shop. So he quickly woke up his dad they bathed and brushed but Tommy was too excited and forgot to eat his breakfast. When they got to the toy store, Tommy couldn’t believe his eyes. He looked everywhere and saw lots and lots of toys as he turned to the right hand side of the shop he saw a robot and immediately asked his dad to buy it which he did and also bought some batteries from the battery shop. When they got home Tommy got the batteries went to his room and put the batteries in it, but as he put the batteries in it, it didn’t work Tommy asked his dad what had happened and his dad replied those are machine batteries. Tommy got the real batteries and played with the robot happily.
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I really enjoyed reading your piece for the 100 word challenge. I found your build-up and description of the excitement felt by Tommy as he prepared to go toy shopping with his Dad set the scene really well. Lucky for Tommy that his Dad had some batteries that worked.
Well done!
I looked forward to reading more of your work soon,
Best wishes,
Saran (Team 100)
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