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Friday, 1 February 2013
Wk 17. Princess P5
CHALLENGE
Once upon a time there was a girl named angel she had a treasure it was a key hat could open all doors, the girl was so proud because no one else had that same key. So one day as she was going out the fell down in the bush because she was proud, then she found that the key was not with her, she became angry that anyone who greets her she will fight the person. One day the friend of angel found the treasure key and gave it to the owner and she learnt never to be proud of herself.
Fantastic piece of writing. My class and I enjoyed looking at your effort. You chose some excellent vocabulary.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
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