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Monday, 27 February 2012

Holiday Project- submissions

There was a girl named Jenny she always like doing bad things.Anytime she does bad things,she would say it wasn't my fault.One day she burnt down a rich mans' house.The man took her to the police station and they put her in jail for sixty years.When her sixty years was due,she was out of prison and by dat time,she was very,very old.Everybody became afraid of her and she was so ashamed of herself because she burnt down someone's house.The next day,she became ill and died. By Emekagbor Ejiro P4

6 comments:

  1. lovely work, keep writing...

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  2. This is a really imaginary story the ideas are really good!

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  3. That is really good keep up the good work.

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  4. This is a fab story i love it.

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  5. What a great piece of writing,it was full of high level vocabuary

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